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FUN: Poetry | The Battle Of Of The Heart By Evince Uhurebor
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Hello guyz it been long. Wow good back here again. Please I need your rating on this poem on the scale of 10 before publishing it on my mag.Thanks as you do.
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Sitting all alone in the dark,covered all over with thoughts and grief. Armies of tears and sorrows all raid down my cheek like a swarm of bees.
The world now, all against a weak soldier with no weapon of defence. Now again am a slave,all alone,alone to myself.
Happiness and joy all came for my defence but sadness remained still,still faith came with all it might and armies but the power of sorrow drowned them all.
Suddenly,the moon came glowing and smiling and a heap of hope came rushing like a whirl wind armed with confidence and strenght.
Alas! Hope was here still and the cries of victory echoes from a distance. Surely the battle is mine and the throne i take must.
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hmmm
now again am a slave all alone, alone to myself.

i love the verse
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#3
"I take must" or "I must take"
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(01-05-2018, 04:48 PM)Hackinubee Wrote:
"I take must" or "I must take"

This is poem, egbon Savage!
Both can be used! I have seen many of those, last last; they will say na to spice it up!
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#5
I love your style.
It's a simple one.
What's more! The message your lines convey leaves me reminiscing about a situation similar to that which motivated you to pen down this poem.
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#6
Nice One
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#7
nice poem
well if you are a poet and this was written by you you can earn $ by submitting it to magazine sites .
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#8
Nice poem man keep it up ...and try to make cool cash from it
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@Cyberlordh @Aniexcels @jonath45 and @Noblez tankx for your feedbacks. I really appreciate. @tmerlin tnkx for d info.
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(01-07-2018, 05:57 PM)Evinsian Wrote:
@Cyberlordh @Aniexcels @jonath45 and @Noblez tankx for your feedbacks. I really appreciate. @tmerlin tnkx for d info.


You're always welcome!
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